Familiar? This is a copy of the Mario Bros. Flash series by Alexander Leon, except with minor story changes and worse Flash work.
Next time, try make something of your own up, okay?
I'll keep this short. The jokes were annoying, totally random, and really not paced well at all. The art was good, but incredibly rigid for something "professional." Oh, and stereotyping everyone except the Brit, typical English humor, and that's always annoying as hell. Get rid of this crap.
but the English one is a stereotype.. unless you think everyone in the UK is from the east end of London and speaks like Bob Hoskins. well done on your attempt at a "professional" critique, but bad luck on not having the intelligence or the depth of knowledge to pull it off. my favourite part was when you dissed us for stereotyping and called our humour typically English in the same sentence. Well done on your first foray into irony, even if it was completely unintended.
Good Drawings, mediocre everything else.
This is obviously a well labored series, but the voice acting is horrible, the story is played out (I won't say stolen, but I'm sorry, it's just not original), and the action needs animation work. This series needs a lot of reworking, tweaking on the animation, and direction. Keep up the work, but don't be so dramatic about your creations.
P.S I'm neither 12, nor 13 (ages of doom listed in your Flashes' bio). I respect your work, but it needs a lot of refinement to really reach its potential.
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